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This is my blog for my english comp 101. There will be many different topics which I will be blogging on. I don't know what they will be..yet. but once I do, I promise you will too!
Thursday, November 29, 2012
Saturday, November 17, 2012
Topic proposal
I am wanting to write my paper on how children are affected by the use of technology in elementary schools. I know that computer use in elementary school aged children is on the rise. Every child starting in K5 has access to a computer and other gadgets in the classroom as well as in technology class. There are many questions that have been raised whether so much access to this technology is a healthy way of learning. Some say it is very beneficial, while others think it will lead to other bad habits.
Kids are engaging in many interactive games in school. Some of the games are for teaching science, math, reading, and even social studies. There are many websites for children like "Starfall" and "Compass Odyssey" that children get on while in technology class. The controversy issue is that the teachers are using the websites as a teaching resource, but the children are just remembering that they are playing games. That's where the issue is. Because children are playing so many games at school, they want the same interactions with technology at home causing bad habits.
I believe that all of the technology is school is great, but with moderation and a variety of teachings. The world is growing fast with technology, and children are going to need to understand it and its power. The Internet and computers have so many options for learning them without the game playing. I know that children need to start somewhere, and the games catch their attention for the time period needed. But because of all the game playing, many children only want to play these games, which leads to children who are unsociable and unhealthy. If children can get on these interactive games, they can learn to use CAD, Microsoft Word, Power Point, and the many other programs available.
5 research questions:
1) Does children being exposed to so much technology affect their social skills?
2) Are children actually learning from the use of technology in school?
3)With every classroom having many students, how are the teachers evaluating the students learning from the computer assignments?
4)Does using so much technology at school affect the way children feel about using technology at home? Do they get obsessed with it?
5)What kind of programs do teachers use to enable learning?
6) Overall, what are the pros and cons of elementary aged children being exposed to so much technology?
Works Cited
Hatch, Kristina E.
"Determining the Effects of Technology on Children." Senior
Honors Projects. (2011) Paper
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Macdonald, Jeffrey G.
"Too Much Computer Exposure May Hinder Learning." USATODAY. 08 Dec.
2004. Web. 15 Nov. 2012
MOHAMMAD, MONA, and
HEYAM MOHAMMAD. "Computer Integration Into The Early Childhood Curriculum." Education 133.1 (2012): 97-116. Academic Search Complete. Web. 16 Nov. 2012.
Ntuli, Esther, and Lydia
Kyei-Blankson. "Teacher assessment of young children learning with technology in early childhood
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2012.
Monday, November 5, 2012
self refletion of "Alyssa Lies"
This paper was the hardest I have ever had to write. It was such a strong topic and I had a great song to fous on, I thought it would be so much easier. I had so many ideas that I wanted to write on, but got so confused as to where to put them and if they should even be used. I wound up having to rewrite all of my paper so that it wouldnt be strictly like a research report. After I rewrote everything, I still struggled with my thesis. I honestly just gave up and decided it was all it was going to be because my brain just couldn't focus anymore on it. Bad, I know. overall though, its properly formatted, cited, I used quotes, and analyzed well.
1. At arm’s length, does the first page look like a research paper? That is, is it formatted in MLA style, and is there a title?
Yes, I think I properly did the MLA format
2. Does the introduction include the topic, text, genre, author(s), context, implied argument of the text, and thesis of the paper? How could all of those parts be included more successfully?
I think I did a great introduction, but my thesis is still not as clear as it should be. I struggled with my thesis, and wrote it the best I could.
3. Does the author rely on sources throughout the paper? It is not a bad idea to rely on at least two different sources in most paragraphs, and you certainly want to use examples and evidence from the text—SHORT quotes and other paraphrased or summarized information—in nearly every paragraph.
I used a good many resources, quotes, and many examples in most of my paragraphs. I believe I showed I did ample research.
4. Is the summary too long or too short? How could the writer improve it?
my summary my be a bit too much, but I felt like it was necessary for this song. This song is short but every bit of it is important for the analysis
1. At arm’s length, does the first page look like a research paper? That is, is it formatted in MLA style, and is there a title?
Yes, I think I properly did the MLA format
2. Does the introduction include the topic, text, genre, author(s), context, implied argument of the text, and thesis of the paper? How could all of those parts be included more successfully?
I think I did a great introduction, but my thesis is still not as clear as it should be. I struggled with my thesis, and wrote it the best I could.
3. Does the author rely on sources throughout the paper? It is not a bad idea to rely on at least two different sources in most paragraphs, and you certainly want to use examples and evidence from the text—SHORT quotes and other paraphrased or summarized information—in nearly every paragraph.
I used a good many resources, quotes, and many examples in most of my paragraphs. I believe I showed I did ample research.
4. Is the summary too long or too short? How could the writer improve it?
my summary my be a bit too much, but I felt like it was necessary for this song. This song is short but every bit of it is important for the analysis
Thursday, November 1, 2012
"Alyssa Lies" and the many other cases that go unreported
Sarah High
Professor Thomas
SEGL 101
November 2, 2012
“”Alyssa Lies” and the Many Other
Cases That Go Unreported”
In the year
2006, when nationwide child abuse was on the rise, country artist Jason Michael
Carroll wrote a very heart touching song, “Alyssa Lies.” Jason struggled for over a year to get this
song completed. He battled whether he
should write it or not. His friend had
written a poem on child abuse which triggered his first response to write this
song. The following day he saw a news
report of a case on child abuse ending in death. (Tucker) In his heart, he knew
that God was telling him this song needed to be written, but his mind just
couldn’t grasp the words that needed to be on the paper.
As the
narrator, Jason Michael Carroll uses strong storytelling and very touching
language to unfold a secret that his daughter’s friend Alyssa is keeping. By repeating the verse, “she lies to cover
every bruise” listeners of this song know that Alyssa was abused at home. Not only does he do this with the words he
chose but also by the tone in his voice.
He puts an abundant amount of emotion within the song. When you listen to the song you can hear his
hurt, almost like you are living his life with him. When he first sings, “I had the worst night of
sleep in years as I tried to find a way to calm her fears,” you can understand
his pain for not only his daughter’s feelings but for Alyssa.
The song
begins with his daughter meeting a new friend at school on the playground. He makes it evident that his daughter is
upset with the verse, “But she came home with tear-filled eyes, and she said to
me ‘Daddy, Alyssa lies.’” (Azlyrics) The
father doesn’t think much about the situation, but his daughter continues
saying “Alyssa lies to the classroom, Alyssa lies every day at school, Alyssa
lies to the teachers, as she tries to cover every bruise.” (Azlyrics) Jason
Michael Carroll continues in the song with him hearing his daughter praying for
him, her mother and Alyssa. His daughter
prays to God about Alyssa, “I know she needs you bad.” The father loses sleep that night because all
he could think about was his daughter’s friend.
He knew that he had to do something to help. Come Monday morning when he brought his
daughter to school everyone was upset, and she kept asking him why. He goes on to tell his daughter, “Alyssa wouldn't be at school today,
cause she doesn't lie in the classroom, she doesn't lie anymore at school,
Alyssa lies with Jesus, because there's nothin' anyone would do.” (Azlyrics) Although Jason Michael Carroll
doesn’t come right out and say it, he uses powerful and heartbreaking alludes
to the fact that Alyssa was abused and beaten to death.
He
constructed this song to not directly say it, but uses strong descriptions for
the audience to believe it so this would be a more powerful song. He wants his listeners to understand how
heartbreaking child abuse is without giving details of this little girl’s life
at home. e waThroughout the song he repeats the verse, “Alyssa
Lies” for it to literally mean that she lies to cover up her situation. But towards the end of the song the exact
words change their definition. They
change to, “Alyssa lies with Jesus because there is nothing anyone would do.” He uses allusions to show that Alyssa dies. When he changes the meaning of those words,
he paints a clear picture as to how big of a problem child abuse is. So many cases are just like Alyssa’s and go
unnoticed until it is too late.
I have found
that there have been many cases just like Alyssa’s that could have been
prevented. The year “Alyssa Lies” was recorded there were
1,530 reported fatal child abuse cases. Many
times the Child Protective Services were not contacted by the schools or
neighbors, or the protective services only minimally looked into the situation just
to leave the child in the home. Out of
20 million cases reported to authorities yearly, about one-third of these cases
were reported as abuse. Most of the
cases that weren’t standing during the first report wound up getting reported
back to authorities. (“Every Child Matters”)
Each state has individual laws for child
abuse. Because of this many children
like Alyssa have been left in their abusive homes. But according to the Federal Government on
the website “Every Child Matters,”
“Fatal
child abuse may involve repeated abuse over a period of time (e.g., battered child syndrome), or it may involve a single,
impulsive incident(e.g.,
drowning, suffocating, or shaking a baby). In cases of fatal neglect, the child’s death results not from anything the caregiver
does, but from a caregiver’s
failure to act. The neglect may be
chronic (e.g., extended malnourishment)
or acute (e.g., an infant who drowns after being left unsupervised in the
bathtub).”
Although we don’t know the kind of life that Alyssa had to
live on a daily basis, we can only imagine the horrible things she went
through. She had bruises on her that she
worked so hard to cover up, which Jason Michael Carroll clearly states. She obviously suffered from child battered
syndrome. If only Alyssa’s new friend
would have come along a little sooner, maybe her life would have been saved.
There are
many factors in a person’s life that may lead up to abusing a child. This song really makes you think about
Alyssa’s situation. Was she living in
major poverty? Or did her mother or
father suffer from severe depression?
Maybe Alyssa was abused because her parents didn’t know how else to
parent because that is the way they were raised. A parent might start abusing the child
because of frustration, overly disciplining, lack of bond, or because that’s
the way they think life is supposed to go. (Marika)
Alyssa was
showing signs that abuse had taken place at home. The biggest thing she had was repeated
unexplainable bruising that she hid from everyone around her. Children may also become withdrawn from
people around them, start wetting the bed, become angry towards others, school
performance may decrease, and may find excuses to stay as long as possible at
school. (Phillip) When Jason Michael
Carroll sings the first verse, “My little girl met a new friend just the other
day, on the playground at school between the tires and the swings,” (Azlyrics) makes
Alyssa seem like she was being withdrawn from her classmates, like she was
sitting between the two watching the others play. So many red flags were there, but just like
many other children Alyssa’s abuse went unnoticed.
I found a
very heart touching case that happened In March of 2007. A four year old girl Summer was brought into
the hospital by her father and pronounced dead.
The little girl was subjected to severe child abuse after moving in with
her father and his girlfriend. She was
punished with a shock collar, severe beatings, and her head would be dunked
under water for not obeying. When she
arrived at the hospital almost 100% of her body was covered in bruises. An autopsy was done and showed that her cause
of death was Pneumonia and internal bleeding. (KXLY)
On August
21, 2002 a twelve year old boy from North Carolina was found dead on his
bedroom floor. Investigation shows that
his father, who is a registered sex offender, and his step mother tortured him
for the four months he was living with them.
The boy had lost over thirty-five pounds because he was kept from
eating. The step-mother kept a written
journal of the boy’s behavior for the father.
He would punish the boy according to what the step-mother said he
did. The boy was beaten with a belt and
whips, hit with a golf club, and chained to his bed at night. A neighbor had heard the boy, but failed to
give detailed information to the authorities.
Because the proper steps to protect this child were not taken, he died
from several wounds including a bleeding brain and a torn kidney. (Coronado)
Both of
these children were a real life “Alyssa” and there are many more subjected to
fatal abuse that can be prevented. The
father took time to think about what he should do just like any other person
would, but the harsh reality is not every child has extra time for you to
think. But because of Jason Michael
Carroll writing this song many children heard it in time and came forward to
their teachers at school about abuse happening at home. Because of his powerful writing skills and
strong emotional vocals he touched many hearts and saved lives. If child protection was a priority, there
would be fewer children like “Alyssa” in the song, “Alyssa Lies.” Children wouldn’t have to lie to their
classmates and teachers, or try to cover every bruise. Less would end up lying with Jesus, because
there was nothing anyone would do.
Works Cited
Azlyrics.
“Alyssa
Lies" lyrics." JASON MICHAEL CARROLL LYRICS. 01 Nov. 2012
Coronado, Ramon. "Man Found Guilty of Beating Son to Death." Weblog post. Chris Cejas Memorial.
25 Mar. 2007. 21 Oct. 2012
Every
Child Matters. Rep. no. 2nd Edition.
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Marika, Kauppi. Anne, Leena. Vanamo, Tuija. Karkola, Kari.
Merikanto, Juhani. “Fatal Child Abuse: a study of 13 cases of continuous
abuse.” Mental Illness 2036-7457 (2012):
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2012
KXLY. "Prosecution
Reveals New Evidence in Child Abuse Case." You Tube. 04 Nov. 2008. Web. 21 Oct. 2012.
Phillips, Noelle.
"Advocates, Politicians Renew Stand against Child Abuse in SC." South Carolina
Network of Children's Advocacy Centers. "The State", 24 May 2012.
Web. 20 Oct. 2012.
Tucker, Ken. “Country Style Touches Tear Ducts.” Billboard 00062510 (2/3/2007). Vol.
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